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Open Poetry #15

The Jolt or The Trip

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2001-07-20 12:59 PM

Conflicting feelings collide
When the  roller coaster ride
Halts unexpectedly
To a sudden stop

The body still feels
The rolling sensations
While it fights
To cushion the jolt

Insulted by opposing forces
The mind swings
Cen -"trip"-etally
Toward the center

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-20 01:12 PM

ooooh, well done! just don't do that stoppin' at the toppin'

good one!

rockin'!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-20 01:13 PM

very cool poem, I like the begining

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

3 posted 2001-07-20 10:50 PM

yes you have captured the sensations well- reminding me of my last experience on one- which reminds me to I want to keep it that way-(my very last)!
You impacted me with this one,
David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

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