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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-07-20 12:47 PM

I’ve been having thoughts lately
I need to feel your saving grace
And once more look upon that holy place
You say we’ve been there before
And you know the emotions I’m feeling
As you take me in hands of healing
Loneliness can be such a reward
For misery suffered one too many times
Oh, how your love can be such a crime
Allow me this one brief rest
From the hell in which I dwell
Weave about me the darkest magic spell
Reach out to me, I’ll fall into you
Offer me arms unfolded again
Like the night unto the day, I will give in

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-20 12:58 PM

'Oh, how your love can be such a crime
Weave about me the darkest magic spell
Reach out to me, I’ll fall into you'

these lines are amazing
this poem is fantastic......wow

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-07-20 01:05 PM

I need to feel your saving grace
And once more look upon that holy place
=================
As you take me in hands of healing
Loneliness can be such a reward
For misery suffered one too many times
Oh, how your love can be such a crime
Allow me this one brief rest
From the hell in which I dwell
Weave about me the darkest magic spell
Reach out to me, I’ll fall into you
Offer me arms unfolded again
Like the night unto the day, I will give in
==============================

this has always been one of my favs of yours...
a perfect example of "classic" PK poetry...
the depth of emotion with the bittersweet conflict that youre so good at expressing, the imagery and poetic phrasing and the always divine rhyme flow.
All written with your gift of making the reader feel the intended emote.
excellent write poet sir
so glad I stopped in for lunch *L*
jm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-20 02:53 PM

very nicely done.. wonderful lines in this..and quite romantic..

I enoyed!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-20 02:53 PM

very nicely done.. wonderful lines in this..and quite romantic..

I enoyed!

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-07-20 02:58 PM

Love it, it's nicely written, Romance!!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-07-20 03:14 PM

Ah PK...what a read....what a delight...takes one from morn to night....

a romantic piece, indeed....

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2001-07-20 03:34 PM

I really enjoyed reading this.
thank you for sharing it.

snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-07-20 07:37 PM

'Loneliness can be such a reward
For misery suffered one too many times
Oh, how your love can be such a crime'

'Like the night unto the day, I will give in'

Softly powerful write, PK...fantastic poem...I really like this...

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

9 posted 2001-07-20 08:06 PM

PoeticKnight,

I really like this one

Beautifully written full of romance.

TaraB

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-07-20 09:11 PM

back to the Romance eh my friend??

wonderful. . .

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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2001-07-20 09:19 PM

Poetic Knight--You have put together the clasic romance...wonderfully done!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

12 posted 2001-07-23 01:50 AM

Wonderful, simply wonderful

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2001-07-25 11:11 AM

enjoy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2001-07-26 03:45 PM

Ain't love grand?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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