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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-07-20 11:26 AM

Loneliness comes a while,
Loneliness carrys on
through the night,
Loneliness.....
that what you feel right now,
When you have lost It's way,
When you have lost It's day,
To shine away,
the dream,
Loneliness.....
comes a while,
when you are alone,
and you think of someone
whom you love,
loneliness Is the thing
that takes It
through your heart
and you feel lonely,
Inside your heart,
you don't know
Why It's happens that way,
Maybe It's
because you have lost that loving feeling Inside,
And It's hard to hide
those loneliness,
It's shows on your face,
Even though you are staying
on the same place,
and because those feelings can't hide ,
you know,
you are having those memories
that left you behind,
Loneliness....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 07-20-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-20 11:30 AM

loneliness does cling at times...and haunts us repeatedly....

nice write..and I hope the loneliness goes away for you...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-20 12:53 PM

I like the idea of "feelings" and "memories" and how they're always the same, and always different. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

3 posted 2001-07-20 02:10 PM

I feel for you in this loneliness. It will end and be well again.
God Bless †

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-07-21 04:11 AM

Having lots of friends helps but when you're missing that someone special loneliness set in...James

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2001-07-21 10:36 AM

nicely written Vandana.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-22 11:07 AM

as in you poem, loneliness can echo its pain
a reverberating refrain

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-07-22 12:19 PM

Yes, lonliness is a constant companion. Good write.
Sandra

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

8 posted 2001-07-23 01:29 AM

Loneliness is certainly an uninvited visitor who rears his head my way on occasion as well

Gives you time to think though in this fast paced world we live in. Not much time to think sometimes, sometimes you need a little bit of this to get things straightened out

Nice job.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

9 posted 2001-07-23 05:24 AM

Loneliness sets in much deeper at night. Nicely written thoughts. I wish you well.

Melton

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