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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-07-20 06:37 AM

A Song In My Heart

The more I kissed her
the more I liked her.
The more I liked her
the more I kissed her.
Her kisses were so sweet
each time our lips would meet.
Could this be love?

The more I kissed her
the more I missed her.
The more I missed her
the more I kissed her.
Each time our lips would meet
her kisses were so sweet.
Could this be love?

I've got to have her.
Have her sweet kisses.
Without her sweet lips
my heart soon misses
all the joy
her kiss can reveal.
All the feelings
my heart wants to feel.
Could this be love?
This could be love.

Jameslee@July20,2001
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© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-07-20 07:08 AM

JamesMichael
This was truly beautiful and laced in romance. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2001-07-20 08:55 AM

romantic indeed... all that kissing though you better have some lip balm..or you'll end up chapped

I enjoyed..and could almost hear this sing itself

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-20 09:05 AM

I agree with Ron, it read like a song. Watch out you don't end up with "permanent pucker."

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-07-20 02:40 PM

Quite the "fetish" for something very enjoyable and desirable... (but I can relate). Enjoyed the read.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-07-20 02:49 PM

Kiss away James! Kiss away

~Krista

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 07-20-2001).]

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-07-20 02:50 PM

Could be , Could be, only you and her will know. Nice poem.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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with you

7 posted 2001-07-20 05:44 PM

James~ always with the kissin

Love it! very nice

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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8 posted 2001-07-20 05:49 PM

enjoy your read

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-07-20 05:52 PM

You like her?
Then kiss her!
So you won't miss her

Very nice, loving write

Titia

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