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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-19 08:57 PM



           Help, Help !!!

help, help
my life is on stand still
this can’t be happening
a nightmare in real

my best friend
got out by mistake
you’re so special to me
this emptiness I can’t take

placed your picture and number everywhere
now I sit here waiting for you by the phone
I miss you so terribly much
oh please, please come home

where is you can be?
my heart is long past sad
in this empty hole you left here
to my life you so much add

you know all the secrets of my heart
it is not time for you to go
my tears fall free, not time for us to part

know all my happiness and my pain
loves me no matter who I am
to you I am always the same

you truly are my best friend
happy to be with me through the good and bad
yes, I know you’re a dog
but still the best friend I ever had

I am doing laundry to rest my mind
I run…..i hear the phone ring
no, sorry I don’t feel like talking
just waiting for a call that happiness again will bring

RING  RING … fear in my heart
the voice says, “did you lose your best friend?”
the words for days I have longed to hear
at last……..the nightmare is at an end

WELCOME HOME HARPER !!!!
     


"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 07-20-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-07-19 09:04 PM


WOW WOW WOW
Lucky you to have Harper and lucky Harper to have you. I know the feeling so much.
Lovely poem

Titia

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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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2 posted 2001-07-19 09:42 PM


Ahh geez, how wonderful you found the one that will always love regardless. I have had that happen too much, found one after a week of searching one time...very good..very gentle big smile
RSWells
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3 posted 2001-07-19 10:02 PM


Further proof that absence indeed makes the heart grow fonder. Glad for your happy ending.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Saunni
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4 posted 2001-07-20 12:04 PM


It was so sad until I got to the end. I am glad you got your friend back.   Cool write here.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

bslicker
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5 posted 2001-07-20 12:05 PM


Yes it is great to have harper back home.
Plus now everyone can see who harper is.

  

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

JLR
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6 posted 2001-07-20 12:13 PM


Awww...I'm glad Harper's home!  Sure know how you felt.  Nice write.
1slippery_lady
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7 posted 2001-07-20 12:35 PM


Slickster, that poem is soooo touching, it litterally gave me GOOSEbimples.  I know JUST HOW YOU FELT Sis, and I sure am happy for you, that he came back home, allll safe and sound.  ****HUGS****
Janette
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8 posted 2001-07-20 01:29 AM


Very nice...I could feel the urgency building as I swiftly read along....great movement.
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