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Martie

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California

0 posted 2001-07-19 08:26 PM

Silk Lined

The sun is flickering on the floor
of the kitchen,
tossed about by lace
it catches at me as I cross it.

To decorate this aging
is no longer possible, but the wind
knows, just moaning in the afternoon
changes the listener.

The mourning dove is calling now,
her dulcimer love song
sachets across the telephone lines
in pewter love.

I know if I catch it all
and somehow roll it round enough
to throw, this feeling will come back
and wrap me with its wings.

Then, perhaps I will be able to explain
why this time of day
makes me feel silk lined.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-07-19 08:57 PM

Martie~
What's to say ... that hasn't been said ?

You ignite imagery and send it bursting forth in confetti array~

Now ... this is so silky ...
What a lovely feeling you give this time of day.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-19 09:23 PM

I do believe I agree with Marge, they are going to have to create a whole new dictionary just so we can find new ways to say "wow" and ... thanks...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-07-19 10:31 PM

Martie,
I love the way you write.

Cpat Hair

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4 posted 2001-07-20 08:30 AM

Martie... indeed a pleasure to read your words and see the images you paint with words..

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-07-20 11:22 AM

The sun is flickering on the floor
of the kitchen,
tossed about by lace
it catches at me as I cross it.

To decorate this aging
is no longer possible, but the wind
knows, just moaning in the afternoon
changes the listener.
==============================
I know if I catch it all
and somehow roll it round enough
to throw, this feeling will come back
and wrap me with its wings.

Then, perhaps I will be able to explain
why this time of day
makes me feel silk lined.
================================

for the same reason reading your poetry makes us feel the same way

"silk lined"
what a lovely moment of inspiration...
what a poetically perfect intend.
Looking at things thru your eyes..makes me realize I walk around blind far too often.
Beautiful Martie..another keeper for my favs of yours...the list grows longer. *S*

only you could give love that satisfies the soul...
see the darkness of my heart and still won't let me go.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-20 11:29 AM

I do believe someone has put all the words at your disposal and mesmerized them to your every whim, thank you for sharing your 'silk-lined' feeling,

exquisite!

BRAVO

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-07-21 05:03 AM

Well Martie you are definitely the weaver of words, and use them in an entirely different way than most, and for that I am one that is most grateful for this was magnificant! I may never look at a ray of sunshine in my kitchen the same again. Thank you.

~ You do this dance only once ~

Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-07-21 09:04 PM

forgot to put this ray of silk sunshine in my library

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

9 posted 2001-07-21 09:31 PM

Yes, this is very good.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-07-21 10:32 PM

Oh, what a beautiful introductory read for me. I so look forward to more. I love the way you toss words around and make a beautiful picture. And it all makes perfect sense! Talented. To say the least.
Sincerely
Rwood

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2001-07-22 11:44 AM

OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was treated to this beauty of yours the other day over the phone and I couldn't wait to come and read it myself. Absolutely fantasmagical my sweet poetress of vision and wonder. I have so greatly missed reading your works.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2001-07-22 01:08 PM

this is outstanding poetry, Martie, you have outdone yourself with this one. The phrasing and the vocabulary....I'm soooo impresssed.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

13 posted 2001-07-22 01:21 PM

Ecellently done, you truely have a way with words.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Denise

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14 posted 2001-07-22 10:44 PM

I do so love the way your mind works...and the way you express those thoughts! Beautiful, as always, Martie!

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

15 posted 2001-07-23 02:16 AM

I'll just go with all of the above

Nothing really hasnt been said already, lovely picture depicted here

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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