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missiechrissie
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0 posted 2001-07-19 08:06 PM


                   Looking out to
                         horizons far
                   Across the water
                        the curve of the earth
                        brings you closer.
                   Miles diminish....
                        waves and spray
                        deliver your touch and kiss
                     upon my windswept face.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-19 09:44 PM



In a few short, swift, strokes, you painted a complete picture...

well done!

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-07-20 08:23 AM


nicely done...
concise, complete image and message

Good work!!

missiechrissie
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3 posted 2001-07-20 12:05 PM


Thank-you- this was a tough one to post, as it is very personal..
          your input means alot!!

Sven
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4 posted 2001-07-20 01:11 PM


*sigh*

indeed, this is just like that splash. . . a memory. . . self-contained. . .

well done. . .

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snowpants
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5 posted 2001-07-20 07:56 PM


This is a very nice write...thank you for sharing it...I enjoyed the great image...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

shadow974
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6 posted 2001-07-20 08:00 PM


Very nice, I like it a lot.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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