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Watching Flutterbys |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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Round and round, look at 'em go! Those butterflies are twitterpated. Without sound they perform a show that has been much anticipated. They dance and dance on through the air as I watch them from up above. I'd like a chance in which to share such a carefree and joyous love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nice ending... and nice use of image and sound... playful yet serious I enjoyed!! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nature holds so many joys, I've often wanted to be a dragon fly. I loved your poem. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Cpat ~ I can never be just serious  well...not usually anyway! I'm glad you enjoyed and I appreciate your comments greatly. They always make my day Shadow ~ Oh yeah, I love dragonflies nature truly is full of little joys like butterflies and dragonflies...I'm glad you agree! You are my type of person Thanks for reading and commenting! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think this is a very cute poem and well written. One can see the dance of the butterflies while reading it. Thanks for sharing. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely...you took me back to our last concert in the park when the butterflies seemed choreographed to the music of the symphony, it was awesome and delightful--you've definitely woven a butterfly scene wonderfully! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
big points for rhyming "twitterpated" and "anticpated" LOL wonderful. . . free-flowing and very playful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
You had me joyfully fluttering  with the kalaidoscopic beauties... I applaud  a exquisite read! ((~.~)) |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Titia ~ well thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed.VAS ~ well that must have been quite a sight! Fabulous thank you so much for the kind words and read!Sven ~ hehe, thank you thank you *bowing* Thanks for stopping by and enjoying! P.S. I love that quote the you used for your signature. It's one of my favourites. Flutterwings ~ coming from a butterfly connoisseur, that is the ultimate compliment! Thank you!  |
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