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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-19 05:32 PM


Thanks

It's all better now.
We shared a new kiss.
I feel happy now.
The sadnesss is dismissed.
It feels good to have
a smile upon my face.
Just one kiss from her
sweet lips has a way
of putting sadness
into it's place.

Jameslee@July19,2001


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-19 05:37 PM


ah... one kiss and all is better...

glad to hear it..

Enjoyed the write!

Mishtheelf
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2 posted 2001-07-19 05:42 PM


  Pleasant mental picture, James.  Thanks for the smile!
MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-07-19 05:42 PM


Face turned to smile for me too -- good to hear a positive tune.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

SmittenKitten
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4 posted 2001-07-19 06:19 PM


Ah, the healing power of a kiss!     
Very nice write James.
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-07-20 05:57 AM


I appreciate you reading and commenting Cpat Hair, Mishtheelf, Mark and Smiten Kitten.
Yes a kiss by the right person can have a wonderful effect on ones feelings and desires...James

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