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Brown-Eyed Susan's
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Brown-Eyed Susan's ~*Marge Tindal*~  In fields of green with golden hues Brown-Eyed Susan's grow Sweet bouquet in soft array Brings sunshine smile emitting glow Hugged in arms of gentle giving Presented in gifted surprise Lit with wonder and delight Reflected in those soft brown eyes *Today my little neighbor brought me a bouquet ... Thank you, my Brown-Eyed Susan~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
awww...isn't that sweet!  I bet that made your day!!! This is a very refreshing poem Marge - it made me smile.Hugs, ~Krista |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh, Marge... This is just too sweet...I can just see those little brown eyes right now.. LOVE it..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so tender! Being given a gift of flowers by a child, who has picked them just for you, is a precious gift. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a sweet lil angel is she....can imagine the warmth inside these precious gift. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a very nice portrait... enjoyed! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Gotta love those brown eyes  LOL Nice job here, enjoyed it much Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
That sounds like the cutest neighbor in the world Have you read this to her yet?Teddy |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Those bouquets, given by little brown-eyed neighbours are always the most beautiful, aren't they.  sweet MargeTitia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such a lovely sweet poem.......for apparantly a sweet cute and lovely neighbor... Thank you dear Marge for sharing it *************************** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Thank you. She did put a big smile on my face. Vicky~ She's a ringer for the kid in the photo. You should have seen her face when I showed it to her ! Sheer delight. BettyLou~ A very precious little thing, indeed. Charisma~ She's a doll for sure. ThUnDeRkYsS~ Yeah ... and she kows I love 'em too ! MishTheElf~ Yes, she got to see it. And she wants me to write in - This is Susan-'I think your name is funny ...' now she says to put in ... lots of these !     Titia~ Indeed ! The flowers are as pretty as she is. MyEnchantedMelody~ Thank you ... She got a big kick out of showing it to her dad. (Hi Matt !)  *Thanks to you all for putting a smile on Susan's sunny face~  *Goodnight, Susan~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, Marge, what a big softy you are....sniff, hmm, I must be catching a cold..very gentle smile |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww how cute! She seems like a babydoll! Beautiful write Sauni Sauni :) |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
I've gathered an arm-full of those brown eyed beauties... and here they are.  I loved it muchly ~.~ ((~.~)) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ You've got me pegged ! I'm a softie - especially where kids are concerned. Is there anything sweeter than the gift of a child's friendship ? Nah ... they are magic ! Saunni~ She is just exactly that. A thoughtful little girl who is such a delight in my life. FlutterWings~ Thank you ! Susan will LOVE the graphic ! We send a *hug* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and here I thought this was for this brown-eyed Susan  beautiful Marge I loved this and I have to save it "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you have a very nice neighbor,lovely Marge ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
What a lovely poem! Thank you for sharing your flowers via poetry - and the smiles, also. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Endearing and heart felt poem. Children are loving and free. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I would love to have a neighbor like that! Beautiful poem. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo sweet, Marge! Precious! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Perfect poem for a warm summer day. Really lovely! Hugs, Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha! Don't you readily know that this would leave a lot of sunny grins behind ye! YES! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I saved my 2400th post just for you Susan, and for Marge's beautiful black-eyed susan poem (was waiting and waiting to be the 24th comment, but no luck!) Your poem showed the love of acceptance in the gift and the giver, and I loved it and I love black-eyed susans too!  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
*LOL* I'll take that as a compliment, dear Susan Thank you!Teddy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I showed Susan your picture ... she wants to look like you when she grows up ! Victoria~ Thank you. She's a sweetie ! Illusion~ Thank you so much. Shadow~ Yes, they are truly wonderful. SongBird~ Susan says that she would pick flowers for all of you. Denise~ Thanks, she's a precious little sweetie. BloomingRose~ Thanks, hon. Karilea~ Yes ... just as she leaves a smile with me to share with all. Mysteria~ Susan says - Gosh. That's a lot. Thank you for the picture too. MishTheElf~ You have a little girl *giggling* ! Tee-Hee ! ~*Marge*~ AND ~*Susan*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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