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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-07-19 02:13 PM


sometimes i...

sometimes i lay awake at night
gazing out at the neon moon
letting thoughts wash over me
stereo plays a familiar tune

your laughter plays like music
softly in my ear
even though you're not there with me
your heartbeat i can still hear

sometimes i see you in my dreams
the images so vivid and so real
i call out to you on the wind
your soft skin i can feel

your touch lingers on me
lips like sweet wine
all of these things serve to remind me
that you truly are mine

sometimes i wonder
wondering if my dreams could come true
will i ever get the chance to show
just how much i love you

my dreams and my wishes
lie on the horizon of tomorrow
there will come a time when my heart
is no longer filled with any sorrow

sometimes i smile
sweet thoughts of you fill my mind
when we are together, the hands of time shift
it's as though someone freezes time

the sound of your sighs
complete me and make me feel whole
i allow the beauty of you
to reach deep inside my heart and soul

sometimes i cry
for we're not truly together
i whisper my deepest fears in the night
hanging onto forever

i wonder if you feel the same
if you think of me when i think of you
your thoughts surround me
i think of you everywhere i go, everything i do

tonight i shall dream
dream of you and i together in love
as i thank our God O'mighty
for sending your love from down above

when i awaken in the morning
together in love we shall be
tis then and only then
i'll see my dreams evolve into reality

amy m. kennedy
july 18th 2001


"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-19 02:21 PM


nicely flowing and touching... I enjoyed!!

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-07-19 06:23 PM




So touching and full of yearning.......It touched me deeply.

I hope you'd realize your dream soon....

Thank you
*******************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-07-19 06:32 PM


I think this is a very nice flowing sweet poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-07-19 06:33 PM


Fabulous writing...James
Sven
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5 posted 2001-07-20 09:14 PM


you're reading my mind Amy. . . *sigh*. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kendaall
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6 posted 2001-07-31 02:45 PM


Babe, Soon very soon you will see the love in my brown eyes. Soon we will wake up together in one another's arms and only  then will all this time apart seem like a distant memory.  Luv, Annette
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with you
7 posted 2001-07-31 04:18 PM


Amy~ your writing is always packed with emotions that your reader feels along with you......this is wonderful  
BloomingRose
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8 posted 2001-07-31 06:37 PM


sometimes i see you in my dreams
the images so vivid and so real
i call out to you on the wind
your soft skin i can feel

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Amy this is a lovely poem. I like it very much.

Hugs,
Deb


Logan
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9 posted 2001-07-31 08:29 PM


Ahhh, Amy/Aim...very gentle smile..and the world stands still for just a little while like it should..best to you, my gentle friend
vandana
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10 posted 2001-08-01 10:32 AM


Sometimes I feel this way too Sometimes I wished that he understands me It seems like that you have written this poem for me and my boyfriend liked it
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