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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-19 10:50 AM


The light shines in
Between the slats of the blinds
I squint as i open my eyes
to the glorious rays of sun
Another day has dawned
Another day to start anew
Make a world
Create a dream
Live a fantasy
The suns rays are a symbol
That today anything is possible
As I shower and dress
The sun still shining bright in the window
I smile,
Knowing that I have my whole life ahead of me
And this early morning is simply
The beginning of something great
I open the door
Step out into the sunshine
And embrace the new day



© Copyright 2001 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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1 posted 2001-07-19 11:12 AM


great way to begin a day, now I have a parody going through my mind, I'm sorry, I hope you won't mind

I do love such inspirations, though, myself!

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-07-19 11:18 AM


nicely done.. soft images and a hope..that this day..is the best day...

I enjoyed

Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2001-07-19 11:25 AM


VAS
I don't mind at all    
have fun with the inspiration

Cpat
I am so glad you enjoyed, you have to live everyday as a new beginning and as if it could be the best day of the rest of your life.  That was all I was trying to get across in this


thank you both for replying    

[This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-19-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-07-19 01:09 PM


Martini~

'today anything is possible'

I believe !  I believe !

Very uplifting thoughts !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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