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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-07-19 09:58 AM




.......electricity between us
speaks 'I love you '

a sweet understanding of promises made
before time began
our hearts knew
connection......
our souls united long before
I ever felt your touch
before your kiss
enraptured me
completed me..........

always
my heart's desire
the only one
to feel the depths of my love
yet you've only just
touched the surface
of a never ending sea
boundless emotions
at which,
you are the source.


~SEA~



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1 posted 2001-07-19 09:59 AM



No one tells her love, quite like you do, just how it is!

Well done SEA!  It's been a few days...glad to feel your breezes again!

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2 posted 2001-07-19 10:00 AM


This is certainly the kind of thing we should all have said about us... I am glad you found yours..

Very nice done SEA

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3 posted 2001-07-19 10:12 AM


always
my heart's desire
the only one
to feel the depths of my love
yet you've only just
touched the surface
of a never ending sea
boundless emotions
at which,
you are the source.
============================

what a lovely write of devotion...
wonderful depth of emotion reached here Sea
Beautiful poem girlie  
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking
I passed that point long ago

VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-19 10:18 AM


Lovely, lovely

very nice

I truly enjoyed the line: ...never ending sea

heh heh heh SEA, very cute, just like you


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5 posted 2001-07-19 10:23 AM


Love it when you pour your wonderful love lines here.....love them Sea.

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-07-19 10:39 AM


I loved this
our hearts do know long before anything else

great poem.

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7 posted 2001-07-19 11:00 AM


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, you say it soooooooooo nice
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8 posted 2001-07-19 11:35 AM


You guys are so great   today is my 4th wedding anniversary.....I emailed this to the hubby   He actually said he liked it very much instead of the usual "that's nice" ROFL   thank you so much  
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9 posted 2001-07-19 12:51 PM


Lovely thoughts from a lovely lady...happy anniversary girl
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10 posted 2001-07-19 12:57 PM


SEA~

'our souls united long before
I ever felt your touch
before your kiss
enraptured me
completed me..........'


Sounds like love to me ! ! !
*Hugs* on your Anniversary, sweet poet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA
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11 posted 2001-07-19 02:13 PM


thank you sweet ladies   he is the best  

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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12 posted 2001-07-19 05:00 PM



SEA-
   This is just so lovely..
   What a wonderful tribute to your love.
   Happy Anniversary to you and your hubby!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JamesMichael
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13 posted 2001-07-19 05:04 PM


Beautiful words from a woman that is very in touch with her emotions.   I like the way you appreciate the caring you receive from another and your enjoyment of a kiss...James
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14 posted 2001-07-19 05:21 PM


Love expressed so devotedly. Your both very lucky to have each other. Congratulations.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

ThUnDeRkYsS
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15 posted 2001-07-19 05:44 PM


Beautiful girl, just beautiful  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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16 posted 2001-07-19 05:49 PM


what a lovely way to celebrate your marriage    congratulations on the four year mark!
~Krista  

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