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**lost** Junior Member
since 2001-07-16
Posts 32ma |
fog words echo through my mind, like so many recited scripts, in a world where the actors, are as real as the characters. clearing the fog, steping into the light, i'm sorry to say, i stand beside myself. and hand in hand, with my greatest fear, decend on down a path obviously unknown. screams of careless warning, barely reach my ears. my head throbs in anger, my throat burns with pain, blood trickles down a lonely face. i don't believe the words you say. i can't believe the words you say. falsified concern, and erupting fear. displaying a simple smile just before siniking into the dark, and dissapating into the warmth of the fog. confused among strangers, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joline, Welcome to Passions! A good first entry, I have never known fog to be warm, but now I want to find some just like that... Please, take some time to look around, get acquainted, read some wonderful poetry, and make this a poet's home for yourself! And, please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Welcome... interesting write... I stumbled in a couple of places to keep my thoughts in order, but some nice images. Like is said above, I never have found a warm fog....but would not mind walking in one on a chill day... look forward to reading more!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to our humble home Joline...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Welcome Joline, and when the fog clears up you'll find us here, waiting for your poems. One thing: keep an eye on your spelling/typing (ha ha that advice coming from me, will give my fellow friends here a big  on their face, why? just look at the place I'm living and you will understand)Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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