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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-07-19 07:20 AM


Acknowledgment

There is no sound as quite profound
As those that emanate the ground
And with the lie are those that fly
Upon the wind in whispered sigh

For they are music to my ears
And play my symphony of years
And they are vision to my eyes
Providing goals of realize.

They fill me with a sense of real
A place to launch my souls ideal
A place to shape the burr of late
A place to hold the hand of fate

There is no sense that stirs me more
Than Eden and its open door
The options of the filigree
The passage of eternity

The music plays to countless throng
And each one hears a different song.


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1 posted 2001-07-19 07:46 AM



But what a chorus you provide, our Sy....this is absolutely beautiful, and I would like to see this, your Eden...

it holds many things
encompassed 'pon
butterflies wings

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-07-19 08:04 AM


Lady,
Your Eden surounds you. *L*

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3 posted 2001-07-19 09:11 AM


Very nice Seymour.

you continue to impress and amaze me with your words.


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4 posted 2001-07-19 09:15 AM


What a beautiful song I hear from this. Thank you for sharing.
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5 posted 2001-07-19 09:47 AM



There is no sound as quite profound
As those that emanate the ground
And with the lie are those that fly
Upon the wind in whispered sigh
=======================
And they are vision to my eyes
Providing goals of realize.
========================
A place to launch my souls ideal
================
A place to hold the hand of fate

There is no sense that stirs me more
Than Eden and its open door
The options of the filigree
The passage of eternity

The music plays to countless throng
And each one hears a different song.
============================

your poetry is the music to my ears!!!
Sy this is so beautiful...
what a wonderful, lovely, spiritual, soulful write...
you take us to the Eden in your mind
and the gift of endless treasures is ours to find.
(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)  
me

~Edens Door~











Andrew Scott
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6 posted 2001-07-19 11:39 AM


Sir Tabin: A very fine read... Thanks for sharing.  Peace!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-07-19 12:17 PM


Cpat Hair,
Nice response, thank you.

Into2B,
Thank you for listening.

JM,
OhhowIlovewhenyouanswerlikethis.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Andrew,
A fine comment, thank you.

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8 posted 2001-07-19 03:32 PM


Seymour~
Such treasures I find
in thoughts from your mind~

'The options of the filigree
The passage of eternity

The music plays to countless throng
And each one hears a different song.'


You play the music with an original composition~
Play on Maestro !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-07-19 04:15 PM


These two lines grabbed my attention:


The music plays to countless throng
And each one hears a different song.


Very true, both literally and metaphorically.  Such is the subjective nature of one's art...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

shadow974
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10 posted 2001-07-19 04:24 PM


Beautifully written, Seymour. I wonder if we each have our own heaven.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2001-07-19 05:36 PM


I like what you hear beacause it comes out in the music of your poetry.
Exquisite, my friend
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-07-19 10:19 PM


Marge,
I hear your music, huggs and kisses.

Mark,
Wonderful comment.

Shadow,
Yes we do thank you.

Elizabeth,
I could ask for no greater praise. Sy

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