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In Anticipation Of Your Kiss
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In Anticipation Of Your Kiss |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I run my fingers softly over your lips, feeling the warmth of your breath, just inches away. Your eyes holding mine in an endless moment, savoring the ache, prolonging the desire. Close enough to feel your heart beating, feel you tremble...or is that me? Murmuring your name, a whisper so full of want. Kiss me...you smile Kiss me...hands tangle Kiss me...lips meet Oh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GirlFriend~ This sizzles !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Paula some kisses can be so yummy...James |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have done a very good job of describing that feeling of  desire just before  meet. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh.....yesssssss.......loved it. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lovely.... very nicely captured and a very nice read. I enjoyed! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Evocative is putting it mildly... provacative, perhaps a bit closer... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh...James |
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