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Desires Triumph
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Desires Triumph |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Confusion mixes desires triumph, substandard gifts & rewards. Absorption wavers on absolute & Grissil's allowed to try. To age & slowly progress onward; & he guess's love is there strong & swift , faint & rare, that is enough to make him move, from stagger to walk, picturing happy blues, sky's above fizzling clouds, protecting from the night's dark shroud. Song & dance that may merge with worry lingers in progressions hurry. Adventure play an inventive way working tasks that wish to stay every course to bring on tired asleep awaiting morning rise. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I like this. There is something about it that just held me there and made me think.. Thank you. ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
good one, and those last 3 lines...my portrait at the moment, I think, my eyes are getting heavy, very heavy, very very heavy |
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