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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2001-07-18 08:42 PM



An out pouring of my heart
that's what this seems to be,
I feel like there is nothing left
here in the soul of me.

I've given all that I have
there's nothing left to give.
Am I just losing my will?
Is there a better life to live?

I've tried so very hard
to keep believing in you,
I no longer know what is  real
or what is actually true.

It's even more than this
but it sure scares me so,
this burden I can not bare
I no longer want to know.

I don't know what to do
or if I can take this any more,
Lord, please help me pick myself up
just one more time.....help me face what's in store......

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-07-18 08:47 PM



He will...you will...

well done...

RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-07-18 09:18 PM


Such an empty feeling when one gives till it hurts and wants to believe. Such tragedy when the slow realization dawns that our actions were in vain. You ask the right person for help at the end and there is hope.
A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
Posts 287

3 posted 2001-07-18 09:32 PM


I recently said that often I feel like a prize fighter. One that has been knocked down one too many times, and all I want to do is lie their listening to the count, 1,2,3.....8,9,10...you're out! BUT we can't do that, because quitting is not a desirable style....so we stand once again, and somehow we manage to continue the fight~!  I felt your words,......

ATOV

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

4 posted 2001-07-20 05:35 AM


Enjoyed the rhyme & you showing with words why Gos's love is.   To pick his children .

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