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I'll write you a poem one day
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I'll write you a poem one day |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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I'll write you a poem one day just to let you know that I love you to tell you that time spend together ment a lot for I was not seeking yet I found you How can I express my feelings to you than write them down in simple lines in chosen words not always right in spelling But does it matter if you will understand what it is I want to say Someday I'll write a poem for you my friends bonded as we are by Passion A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is lovely, Titia. Anyone you write for is indeed blessed!  All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nicely written and full of heart, Titia. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Titia, Sometimes, a poem can be "found" within a poem. I hope you don't mind the liberty that I have taken: I'll write one day to tell you I was not seeking my feelings in simple chosen words that you will understand What I mean to say I'll write for you bonded as we are Yours was a fine poem, I hope you'll tolerate my messing with it. I couldn't help myself. \\ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia, it is not hard to imagine how this poem evolved... it is our good fortune to have you here! Thank you for all of your beautiful posts, the visits to your gardens, the insight to your heart... Sunshine |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Consider your poem written dear lady. Heartfelt, solid and honest. Thanks. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
No time like the present!!! Go write it.!!!! today!! Then you can change the title to. I WROTE A POEM FOR YOU TODAY. (smile) (regret is not something us tender souls can live with for long.. so keep writing.) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Titia, I'm becoming more and more happy to get to know you through your poetry your cats and not your pic. Wish someone would come install my scanner so I could do pics. Of course the pics I do have I have to get you to help me post them. I so appreciate your doing so before, even though hardly anyone saw that poem and pic, to my knowledge. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ You write of the heart so freely~ What a blessing it is to have you invite us into your garden~ HUGS for the beauty of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Titia...oh this is so sweet... |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Nicely done... ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
There is a woman named Michelle and I am waiting for the day she will write a poem for me...it will be my prize...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and this is it isn't it ? "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I believe you did  Nice piece Titia |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely Titia...I've noticed what a breath of warmth you are in this place...  K |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear friends, as it would take too much of my internettime to answer to each one of you personally I'll thank you all in once. And I don't care if my words are used to create another poem, it's interesting to see. Titia  all of youA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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