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missiechrissie
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 8
Boston, Ma. USA

0 posted 2001-07-18 07:12 PM

               Your eyes
                can't see
               What is laid bare
                at your feet.
               You reach out to touch,
                but pull back
                  in fear?

               Disbelief..
                  in the reality,
                    of the soul
               that is stripped of it's armour.
                        The heart
                    that is no longer bound,
                       by walls.

                 Set yourself free,
                    lift the veil of uncertainty.

                              -missiechrissie

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-07-18 07:13 PM

Welcome to Passions. It's hard to set ourselves free isn't it? I really liked this one, look forward to reading more.

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-18 07:38 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-18 07:39 PM

I liked the format of this and the questions asked. . . daring to be truthful. . .

welcome!!!

hope that you like it here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-07-18 09:36 PM

the message in this is great,
i can't wait to read more!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-19 03:36 PM

MissieChrissie~
Welcome to Passions.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-19 03:43 PM

very nice message and a very nice poem. I enjoyed a great deal!

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

7 posted 2001-07-19 03:52 PM

Excelent poem, I like the stile and the message.Profound.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

missiechrissie
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 8
Boston, Ma. USA

8 posted 2001-07-19 04:30 PM

Thanks!!!

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