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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
unheard, But felt, it slips like early rays between half closed blinds making light of midnights promise Grasping for the edges I wrap them around me trying to ward off the chill of knowing |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What is left unsaid whispers loudly... well done, Sir! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dadgumit, you are almost too good  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Haven't we all at times? Very nicely said, Cpat..gentle smile |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Silence can speak volumes, Ron. Well said. All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very well written, It intrigues me to look beyond the words. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah to hide in dreams and the peace of sleep's release. Few words, large effect. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
trying to ward off the chill of knowing~! now that is interesting~! I likes! ATOV |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I have to agree with Interloper...there is greatness amongst us. I truly love your style. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Cpat, you just weave them and weave them into perfection of image and message...well done! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Oh! My Goodness! A poetic work of art. I stand and applaud  with admiration of a true poet laureate. Have this one published!  I guess by now you know I love it? You inspire me! ((~.~)) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes...and oh no...sigh |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
it slips like early rays between half closed blinds making light of midnights promise ...what a cool stanza! I love the play on words with "light". I also love the cold/ironic/bizzare imagery of wrapping BLINDS around one's self to keep warm! What an image of taking pieces of plastic and aluminum to use as a blanket! And "the chill of knowing"... in itself a very potent phrase! Dense and powerful, Ron! -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh, this is nicely done....love poems that never use the title, but the title says so much...... |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
This strikes me as a quite insightful look at a strong feeling of regret, and perhaps a hint of something else... betrayal? Ted |
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