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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-18 11:43 AM


awaken to love
love’s reality awaits
dreams must fade away

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-18 11:49 AM



a plain plane's viewpoint
dreams allow hope to preside
love's dream still resides

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-07-18 01:13 PM


dreams fade with your touch
awakening me to your love
sweet reality

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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3 posted 2001-07-18 02:07 PM


Dreams transform to real
with reality of Love
Others now form new


Nice work Interloper

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2001-07-18 02:42 PM


Very nice Loper, this was a sweet read to wakeup to with my cafe this late morning...

*~coco~*

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5 posted 2001-07-18 02:53 PM


Interloper,
Enjoy reading about love.

Sven
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6 posted 2001-07-18 06:34 PM


this is indeed the way to wake up. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
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7 posted 2001-07-18 06:42 PM


dreams must? fade away???

or is it, that when love enters profoundly enough, dreams fade as their need fades

a senyru that makes one think, good one!!!

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8 posted 2001-07-19 10:54 AM


InterLoper~

Lost in dreams of you
Transported in ecstasy
Far beyond pillowed wishes
Doesn't get better than this
Reality awakens

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-07-23 04:37 PM


Waiting for that wakeup call  
Charisma
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10 posted 2001-07-23 04:43 PM


Great poem Interloper. love it

Charisma

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11 posted 2001-07-23 06:22 PM


Lady ~
I awake to you
now the sweet dream comes to life
loved more easily


SEA ~
reality calls
clean sleepy dirt from your eyes
behold our sweet love

Ron ~
new experience
food for future dreams to grow
continuation

Cocobaci ~ It is sooooo good to have you back  

Sy ~ Me too ... ~^o

Sven ~ We think along the same lines ... isn't that scary?

VAS ~ Think?  Me?  Surely you jest ... of course you do ... Don't you think profound love would cause more profound dreams?  I would hope so  

Marge ~
harken to me dear
pillowed wishes can come true
when you dream of love
the love of your life you see
turns reality to dreams

BrightStar ~ Cockadoodledoo  


Charisma ~ Thank you for stopping by for the read  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-23-2001).]

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