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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-18 11:14 AM


Such twisted intent
still haunting my memories
there should have been truth

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-18 11:19 AM



Ouch.  This one bites.

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-07-18 11:33 AM


there must always be
truth between two committed
else pain will result

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-07-18 11:38 AM


...I sense a ripple turning into a wave... ;->
For some reason...  I can relate to this one...  ;->  Bottom-line:  I like it!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

shadow974
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4 posted 2001-07-18 03:13 PM


Pain!!! Truth is a must!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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5 posted 2001-07-18 03:16 PM


Yes... this one has a bite... but it is very nicely said..and presents a truth we do well to consider..

I enjoyed

athena4
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6 posted 2001-07-18 08:22 PM


Sandra,
     This says so much in so little words. I can sure relate, and as of recently, as you know....
          Love, Elise

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-07-18 08:25 PM


I agree wholeheartedly, Sandra.  Twisting the truth never got anyone anyone.  Nicely said.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

SpitFire
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8 posted 2001-07-18 08:37 PM


~Oh gosh, yes. Damnit! - Love your title lady. *Peace you. ~A.
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9 posted 2001-07-18 08:48 PM


My reaction like SpitFire's
Damn it!
Well done.
            

Honeybee
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10 posted 2001-08-01 10:00 PM



So true! Perfectly expressed in 3 lines  

Melissa~

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