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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-18 10:19 AM


The night grew still and dark appeared
The fear of everything settled in
I sat alone
By the fire pit
and thought.
You appeared
from out of nowhere
Your arms wrapped tightly around me
I felt your lips brush my neck
and I smiled.
Worried thoughts
disappreared for a moment
as I got lost in your touch
remembering
Thinking of the last time I had anything
anything quite this real
Or is it?
Would this new found love,  
this new security
Would it all be gone by the morning light
Or would we hold on with all we have
to save each other from the past
At last we had found something
But it was never supposed to be with each other....

[This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-18-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-18 10:29 AM


oooh, I like this,
I hope you hang on
I hope it's real
I hope for hope


Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-07-18 11:20 AM


VAS
thanks so much

I hope we hang on too.  I need to hang on, for once everything seems right.

thanks again for the response.

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-07-18 01:23 PM


hmm..*chills* this one brought...i like this a lot..great writing..i could feel the very pit of me feeling this!

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.."  -demi moore

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-18 01:35 PM


dare to hope and love
love without reservation
makes life much better

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5 posted 2001-07-18 02:19 PM


I too hope you both hang on.. finding it is hard..holding on to it, even harder..

Nice poem!!

Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-07-18 02:31 PM


Thank you all so much for your replys.
It's looking like this one may turn out to be THE ONE, the funny part is that for years I saw him only as my friend, my closest friend, the person I set up with all my girlfriends and now I see him as a completely different person.

thanks again for reading and replying

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost


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