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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-07-18 05:16 AM

Sailing chimes
touch parts of mind
a hammer rings
the notes in time
my heart in beat
is but bass drum
harmony becoming one
two sounds in meld
as perfect whole
a dance of union
of the soul
symphonies
within our song
laughter--moans--
joy of belong
the express-
exhale of breath
finally
I've come back home.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-18 06:57 AM

Wonderful Serenity ... from the title, to the flow, to the sentiments and mood you've captured ... very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-18 08:34 AM

very nicely captured...a pleasure to read

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-07-18 09:14 AM

Keep dancing, Serene one...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-18 09:46 AM

from a lilting nature to the peace of coming home to a much needed, restful stop

enjoyed

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-07-18 10:06 AM

great read

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-07-18 10:38 AM

Serenity~
LOVE the title !

'harmony becoming one
two sounds in meld
as perfect whole
a dance of union
of the soul'

To be sure ... you dance to the music~
*Smiles*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2001-07-18 02:06 PM

beautiful seren. Keep dancing

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-07-18 06:35 PM

spin on oh dancing one. . . get lost in the feeling. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-07-18 09:33 PM

serenity-
   This is awesome...and the title is perfect!
   I love it!!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

10 posted 2001-07-18 09:39 PM

The siren lures, from the roiling sea?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2001-07-19 12:19 PM

a dance of union
of the soul
symphonies
within our song
laughter--moans--
joy of belong
the express-
exhale of breath
finally
I've come back home.
=======================

breathe baby...breathe...
then take their breath away

Im finally here...been out in chickenville
helping lil sis...
will write soon, when I can get caught up.
(the chickens think me singin sucks eggs)
AHHH what do those peckers know ROFL LOL
hugs me twin
me

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking
I passed that point long ago

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

12 posted 2001-07-19 12:29 PM

Oh yeah girl

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