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Mishtheelf
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since 2001-07-10

Posts 68

0 posted 2001-07-18 04:38 AM

A cool breeze careses my cheek
As I gaze with wonderment at the endless night sky.
Gentle thoughts float across my mind,
Bringing with them questions,
But... questions could do naught but detract
From the beauty of the heavens.

[This message has been edited by Mishtheelf (edited 07-18-2001).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-18 07:32 AM

Lovely thoughts Mishtheelf ... sometimes we need to turn off the questions and simply gaze in awe to the heavens, beautiful indeed. Reminds me to pause now and again in appreciation, thank you.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-18 08:35 AM

nice done..and no distraction here..just the pleasure of the image and scene you set up in your poem.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-18 10:41 AM

yep, what they said

and especially what you said!!! Enjoyed.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-19 06:59 PM

Your breeze just touched my cheek.

Titia

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-19 07:06 PM

Sometimes, questions can add to the beauty, for in their questioning, the awe can be expanded and further appreciated, so long as the focus is not tipped to favor solely the questions posed... A vivid and sensory write.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2001-07-20 12:11 PM

mmm...I love those moments. Thank you for that refreshing pause of reflection!
~Krista

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

7 posted 2001-07-20 02:58 AM

Captures a memory..
mm, I know what u mean, I question things too often.. one of my friends and I were lying watching the sky at night time, and we ended up having a full blown conversation about.. I can't even remember what.. provoked by the stars.. But Mark's right, sometimes, the more you understand something, the more you can admire it. Personally, I just like the moment.. and just being there is the amazing bit.
Short and thoughtful. well done

-Lynne

“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..”

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-20 03:00 AM

Wonderfully written! Beautiful!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-07-20 06:09 AM

Very nice writing...James

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-07-23 01:06 PM

Mishtheelf-
   Lovely thoughts here...
   and very nicely done..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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