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Southern Moon |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Southern Moon southern moon shimmering bold tonight’s secrets you behold shall you reach in grabbing my heart create in love a new start or will you throw it away making me a fool to pay "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Never a fool...always a poet. This is your heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I can very much relate to this. It's scary to offer the trust again...but there is really no other way to find out for sure either.  Simply constructed, but still with emotion apparent to be both an observation and a plea. Lovely! |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I often ask the same things. This is beautiful! |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
Easy to feel this work. It has an undeniable truth to it, yup yup. You can't fake that. Good work. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Are we ever sure? We have to want it. [This message has been edited by g-hm (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the moon has a way of it's own my friend. . . sometimes though, we can ask it a favor. . . well done with this one. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
To share secrets with the Moon - - - I've done that. Easier than sharing with a human. |
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