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Clearly And Surely
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Clearly And Surely |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Clearly And Surely ~*Marge Tindal*~ Clearly Oh, so dearly Held in sweet reverie You will always be in my heart Nothing in this world could keep us apart In poetic movement of verse I'll always think of you Oh, so dearly Clearly Surely You love me too Nothing else do we need No other love will ever do Loving each other through eternity Caring, sharing eternally Holding, enfolding too Always in love Surely ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Ahhh yes...so beautiful are these.  This style really is great for the romantic poetry isn't it.  I love these!! love ya,  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow....this is so tenderly written from the heart! No jokes tonight, this was lovely, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmarge!!!!!!!! Hugs. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was outstanding, I truly loved every word of this romantic piece. Take care..Sue Suetang |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
Sometimes romantic poetry seems a bit as though it's made from a cookie cutter. This is definately different, and pretty. Good job |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Nothing in this world could keep us apart." I'd like to find a match like this...it would take two of like thoughts and desires...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Perfect form, Perfect verse Perfectly beautiful Lzi |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And this is "clearly" why we love you so "dearly" Marge ... a wonderfully tender and romantic piece, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
smiling miles of wiles again, aren't you... well done, our Marge... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..and a pleasure to read... I enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Just playing in my rictametered sandbox.  Thanks, sweetie. Serenity~ You be's a good girl ! Me wuv ya'! SueTang~ I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it.  MishTheElf~ Fresh baked ! JamesMichael~ Yes, love ... but it starts in one heart and spreads ! LizzieLove~ Perfect reply ! Kit~ Awwww ! Thanks, lady ! LadyInWhite~ Yeah ... many miles to go. CPatHair~ Thanks so much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
eager to read your work keen anticipation breathlessly reading ev'ry word mining all the treasures hidden within refining each nugget we find committing them to heart await recall eager Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Meager Mayhaps they be Mined from sheer fantasy Muddle through visions so devine Making time to genuinely refine Memory making just for two My offerings are true Mostly they are Meager ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
valued we love your work it brings us happiness you cause us to use our noggins your work proclaims it's virtuosity we sit in awe of your talent the fruits of your labor you must know are valued Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Clearly, you are wonderful!! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MARGE MY HATS OFF TO YOU no i shant go any further lovya |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Praising Brings just rewards Heaped on in spoons full-sweet Causes blush to seep to these cheeks Just the right amount of endearing thoughts Knowing that your penning has sought To leave a glow of verse Across hearts in Praising Martie~ And YOU are a sweet spoonful of sugar~ Love you~ SoaringEagle~ Just that you are here is 'further' enough. I love you~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
*sigh*...this is so sweet margie... i like ...  hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Perfect! Wish I had written this one myself. Thanks for sharing. Peace! |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
You continue to amaze me with your writing. Gail |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Thanks, gal ! Andrew~ Well, I sure thank you bunches. Nice to see you. Gail~ I certainly do appreciate your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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