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False Teeth
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False Teeth |
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Lance McLove New Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 8 |
False Teeth False teeth sitting in a glass as if waiting for a picture-- grip and grin with the mayor perhaps, or selling a used car If I could eat an apple it would taste even better than apple sauce. But I won't say, "Alas" to you. You don't care when all you can do is smile. Just wait till I stick you back into my mouth and have a glass of Cabernet or Port Wine or, God forbid, Merlot. Your stained smile won't get you a picture with the mayor. Who'll be smiling then? |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
lol! I am sorry but I love your writing style! I am sure you are going to get sick of my replies! But you are going to have to live with it since i am going to continue reading! Good job! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
imagination is your forté I'd say!!! Thoroughly enjoyed, first of yours I've run into, so glad I did! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lance I loved this......what a classic!!! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
These false teeth still have a lot of bite in them.... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Enjoyed!!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The title drew me in and I have to say this is a real hoot! lol Different sort of style you display, and I like it. Cheers!  Deb |
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