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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-17 08:39 PM


     
Just a little Merlot
and a goblet of you
then perhaps I can show
all that I long to do.

Temptations of longing
and a rich ruby wine
inhibitions melting
Ah, my love, you're divine.

Reddest dark fruit of vine
nothing quite will compare
but a love lost in time
found in you, if I dare



[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-17-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-17 10:18 PM



Smiling ~ glad you have your priorities straight...a little Merlot, a goblet of you...

yes!

Logan
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2 posted 2001-07-17 10:19 PM


To dare is sometimes to win..nice read..very gentle smile
shadow974
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3 posted 2001-07-17 10:23 PM


Very nice, a toast to the fruit of the vine.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

athena4
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4 posted 2001-07-17 10:35 PM


Sandra,
    I know the feeling well.  I'm right there with you tonight!
          Love, Elise

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5 posted 2001-07-17 10:47 PM


Nothing like a nice Merlot
Or maybe Chardonnay
Don't forget the rich LaFit
Or fruity Beaujolais...
Madiera, please, my dear
Or even just champaigne...
Whatever it will take to make
Us forget all this rain!!!!!  

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-07-18 08:44 AM


oh yeah.....but can I have my Akadama Japanese purple plum please?  Mmmmm.....time for a toast to this fruit of your muse!!!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


VAS
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7 posted 2001-07-18 09:55 AM


great flow

charming piece

wish the pic had come through, I hate to miss out

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-07-18 11:07 AM


try love if you dare
risk reward ratio exists
dare to commit heart

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-07-18 12:15 PM


Didn't UB-40 have a song about something like this, a while back...?  I've found that music can have the same effect, without the 'aftermath"...  A rich write, Sandra.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-07-18 03:20 PM


I like Merlot...James
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11 posted 2001-07-18 03:23 PM


Nice... nothing like a sip of poetry... and this I think will age well


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12 posted 2001-07-18 06:30 PM


ahhh. . . very heady, with just a hint of sage and berry flavor. . . mmmmmmmm. . .

wonderful Sandra. . . this is indeed a good year. . .  

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