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BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-17 07:31 PM

In love I fall
a treasure in last nights wind
swept far away in cool waters
filled with ecstasys love song
forever play, is on my lips
breathless, caught in raptures kiss
dreaming of unforgettable eyes
a gift of time pressed in still palms
reflect golden sunlight
if I step out of this dream
I'll burst into bloom
to fall in love
again and again
~*~

BloomingRose

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-07-17 07:47 PM

Beautiful write ... when we do wake up, love awaits

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-07-17 07:49 PM

You're blooming beautifully here

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-17 10:13 PM

BloomingRose~
Beautifully presented.

'if I step out of this dream
I'll burst into bloom
to fall in love
again and again'

Just lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

4 posted 2001-07-17 10:29 PM

Beautiful poem, Love... it is addicting.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-07-17 10:35 PM

Beautiful indeed, liked this much

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2001-07-18 09:10 AM

Interloper~ Dreams can be wonderful! Thanks.

Titia~ Thank you so much.

Marge~ I think the picture speaks a thousand words. I wonder what others see... so glad you like this.

Shadow~ I feel the same about the picture, but I thank you for your nice comment.

Thunder~ Thank you

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-07-22 03:59 PM

Lovely write. Enjoyed this very much.

**lost**
Junior Member

since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

8 posted 2001-07-22 04:05 PM

i like your choice of words. to me it it just a description though. i remember no experience or experience new emotions. this is just my thought though others may love it, and do. as the previous post show

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-07-22 05:40 PM

loved it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-07-23 05:23 PM

Deb-
   This is absolutely lovely..
   Beautifully done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2001-07-23 08:58 PM

Poe~ Thanks so much.

Lost~ Thank you for your honesty, I appreciate your thoughts.

Van~ Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed.

Vicky~ Thank you.

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