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Twenty or Less...#6 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
(Now that I've posted most of my older poetry and lyrics, I'm ready to dive into some fresh writing and thoughts. Since my style tends to be lengthy and very strict form and rhyme, I'm going to try something a little different for me: a new series of poems that I'll call "TWENTY OR LESS..." implying that each will consist of twenty or less words, in free-form style, with the intent of letting the words conjure up subjective impressions and definitions for my readers -- let the previous boundaries of style and form evaporate, for a while, and let's see what your impressions are... Enjoy! -MVS) ======================================== Matrixed American life Across its facade of love Silently enshrouding spiritless misery Fight the inertia (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
No interpretation needed. I feel exactly like this. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Right on, Sandra. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Fight the inertia ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love It!!!!! BTW "Train" is a band....Drops of Jupiter a song : ) Thank You |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting verse... I understand it..and agree... I am liking this endeavor of yours.... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Very good....brevity offers much insight... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I'll have to hear it some time, Connie. Thanks for the reply. Thank you, Ron -- this endeavor is proving to be very rewarding and enlightening. Yes it does, my Lady. Sometimes the point is all that matters; other times, you never want to get to it... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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