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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-17 03:45 PM


great illuminant
love ignites fires of passion
not easily quenched
~*~
excited sparks fly
hot sensual ignition
soft-lipped reception
~*~
points of contact meet
welding together the twain
sizzling passions meld

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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1 posted 2001-07-17 03:47 PM



I don't know where you are...but where I am?  We don't need any more heat around here....

whew!

[smiles] very good!

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2 posted 2001-07-17 03:48 PM


Whew... you tell me when the fire trucks are supposed to show up... I want to see them fight this blaze.. ( grinning)

Very nicely done Interloper... very nice indeed....

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3 posted 2001-07-17 04:14 PM


YOU PEOPLE ARE GONNA BURN THE PLACE DOWN!     lol..I love this, yanno?

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4 posted 2001-07-17 06:59 PM


Liquid heat flows from the screen
Perfect.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-07-17 07:24 PM


Asbestos suitor
fire retardent frigid
anguish insurance


....feeling silly....excuse moi

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6 posted 2001-07-17 07:32 PM


Lady ~ Thanx   Just thought I'd help y'all see how warm it can get here in Texas...

Ron ~ RSWells took care of that and the fire fighters got the asbestos all wet!  

Temptress ~ Fire?  Here? Whachootink?  

Sandra ~ Will you say that again?  My friends doan think I'm perfeck at all

RSWells ~ Silly?  You? Shore!  Thanx for stoppin' by neighbor  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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7 posted 2001-07-17 07:50 PM


Loper,   gosh this is a sweet write and ya know what else 'me likes' your poem a whole bunch...

Hugs2u
*~coco~*

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8 posted 2001-07-17 09:55 PM


InterLoper~

This is the 911 operator -
What is the nature of your emergency ?

FIRE ?


Units have been dispatched !
Please stay on the line.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-07-17 11:27 PM


Exquisitely written, I loved every word.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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10 posted 2001-07-18 09:48 AM


Sweltering swelling
libidinous fire sizzles
molten lava flows

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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11 posted 2001-07-18 10:10 AM


LOL
Delightful


I love the "soft-lips" line
and the meeting of points melding

sizzling, for sure

cute, too!


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12 posted 2001-07-18 10:11 AM


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Points of contact meet
Welding together they twain
Sizzling passions meld
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is so nice....

Connie

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13 posted 2001-07-18 10:41 AM


Coco ~ It is Sooooooooooo good to have you back, albeit only once in a while

Marge ~ Huge grin here   By the way, I'm still holding ...

Suetang ~ Wow!  Exquisite?  Wow!  Thanx

SEA ~ Show off!  I refuse to respond in like manner.  Shhhhh, the PP

VAS ~ Thank you too much

Zinsser ~ Thanks for stopping by to read.  I appreciate your comment very much

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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14 posted 2001-07-18 01:05 PM


meeeeee?????????a show off?????????never..... *smooch*
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15 posted 2001-07-19 11:03 AM


Woohoo!  
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16 posted 2001-07-19 04:28 PM


Woo...is it just me or is it HOT in here?!  
Love it  
~Krista

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17 posted 2001-07-19 05:01 PM


*wow* what a heat.........love this fire.

Charisma


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18 posted 2001-07-31 08:06 PM



Not only do you pen great senryus on a regular basis, but, this time you have penned some super SEXY senryus too    I'll second that "hot!"

Melissa~

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19 posted 2001-07-31 08:32 PM


SEA ~ Everybody's looking  

BrightStar ~ Uh-huh

Krista ~ Now that's the response this should elicit   Checked your hormone balance lately?  Mine's way off!

Charisma ~ Got any marshmellows?

Melissa ~ Thanks for rescuing this from the bone pile    I think sexy is good    

:)
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20 posted 2001-07-31 08:35 PM


well now, now now, this is quite enlightening.....sorry I couldn't help saying that  

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


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21 posted 2001-07-31 11:04 PM


Wow!!  I love this!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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22 posted 2001-07-31 11:07 PM


good grief!! what are they looking at?!  
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23 posted 2001-07-31 11:13 PM


InterLoper~
You Passion's Pyro, You !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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24 posted 2001-08-01 02:26 PM


Colleen ~ If this enlightened you I am overjoyed ... well, over-somethinged

LW ~ Wow!  I love that you love this


SEA ~ "They" are always looking at we'uns

Marge ~ I'm sure glad you didn't finish that phrase   Too many might agree with that ...

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