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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Healing a need to come just to you heard you could wipe away hurt despair sorrow for you have a cape that enfolds all black on the outside red, inside it is said you will draw one in close to your chest then enfold your arms around as all senses are left with the outside world only comfort found, within sometimes healing takes but a moment’s lifetime other times, moments longer so may I step up, and in? ~*~ only you know, that after the healing the black cape turns white on the outside, but remains red, within and disappears |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting poem... touches of mystery around the common place act of comforting another... I enjoyed the images and the form.. Nice work |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ron says it better than I. Well done. Bob |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And how did you hear of my cape? It was SUPPOSED to be a secret  |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
intriguing poem, spell binding & captivating. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting writing...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I like this phrase: sometimes healing takes but a moment’s lifetime This says a lot and in a couple of different ways. Indeed, a thought-provoking write. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Lady Lady, if you've found it, please tell me about it.  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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