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Open Poetry #15
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
0 posted 2001-07-17 01:42 PM


Necessity
Eating up
Energies
Dividing their strength

Deciding
Even
Simple
Pleasures
Are
Impossible to attain
Recalling then

How the
Omnipotent One answers
Prayer knowing our needs
Even before we ask, but that we need to remember to ask and  then believe

© July 17, 2001
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Flutterwings
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since 2001-07-10
Posts 288
Maine
1 posted 2001-07-17 04:53 PM

Authentic and packed with meaning.  
~ Ask and it shall be given ~ I do believe.
Very much enjoyed this artistic creation.  
((~.~))
VAS
Member Rara Avis
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Oregon
2 posted 2001-07-17 05:13 PM

sanctuary much Flutterwings!!!
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
3 posted 2001-07-18 04:59 PM

I do like your acrostic description of words.  Recalling then.... threw me for a bit and then I remembered when I did.  Another good write.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-18 06:11 PM

Amen.
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