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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-07-17 10:23 AM


Coming Attractions

~*~

sweet smile comes easy
all one needs, is look to you
love comes shining through

~*~

this touch is warm, good
poled magnets drawn together
equator’s melt line

~*~

whisper, to draw near
a soft smile, this touch, sincere
surround sound in sighs

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-17-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-17 10:26 AM


nice works.... I enjoyed!!


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2 posted 2001-07-17 10:35 AM


Lovely. Soft and peaceful.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-07-17 11:15 AM


Smiles reflecting smiles,
Sparkling eyes following moves,
Knowing you’re watching,
Seeing you seeing him just proves
Thoughts are in words or glances.

nicely expressed in a Haiku form

Gloom

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4 posted 2001-07-20 04:22 PM



Lady In White-
   Lovely thoughts...enjoyed much..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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5 posted 2001-07-20 05:39 PM


very very nice!  

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