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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-17 06:56 AM

The Attraction of You

Sometimes, the nearness of you is enough
to empty my mind of all, but memories shared.
How powerful, the attraction of you.

Sometimes I wish to reach out to you
by voice, by words, hoping to not be misunderstood.
How hard it is, to be in control.

Sometimes I lose that self-control
finding myself there, in dreams, by your side, unnoticed.
How strong, your attraction is.

And other times, I follow those dreams
to be with you, if only for a moment's touch.
How I love, what attracts me to you.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-17 07:48 AM

that something... certain something...

very nicely done... I enjoyed as usual...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-07-17 08:57 AM

...to freeze that moment of attraction and savour it in its entirety at any other moment in time -- that is something that poetry tries to attain, and sometimes succeeds in doing... Written with feeling, Wynter.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-17 10:10 AM

As a moth is attracted to flame ... do not burn yourself, sweet Maureen, just enjoy the warmth

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-07-17 01:30 PM

Yes, that attraction is so strong, and as Interloper said, can be dangerous. But also it can be a wonderful feeling to have and hold within.
Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-07-17 01:47 PM

Aha...very silky thoughts...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-07-17 02:17 PM

I gotta agree with Interloper on this one Maureen, but the warmth is wonderful. Enjoyed.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-07-17 03:25 PM

Ohh yeah..I know this well! I love the message here.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-07-17 03:29 PM

It's a great feeling. Lovely expressed!

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