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Sometimes I Miss Her

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 07-17-2001 06:38 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Sometimes I Miss Her

Months and months have now passed
and I still don't know why she kissed me like that.
She was the best kisser I have ever kissed.
Her kisses never ceased to amaze my lips.
They got my attention that much I know.
Her kisses had a way of transforming me right to the place I wanted to go.
They drove me absolutely wild
but they relaxed me also.
They tucked me into bed just right
and assured me of sweet dreams all thru the night.
I suppose it had something to do with a meeting of two kindred spirits both possessing the same goals
and a desire to kiss with abandon and passion deep from within our souls.
Like a fine tuned guitar we played all the right chords.
Our lips destined to meet in perfect drum beat.
I never met a woman that kissed me so perfect before.
One kiss was never enough I always wanted more.
I'm not sure why it didn't work out.
Everytime our lips met we kissed our brains out.
Months have gone by since her kiss pressed to my lips.
Sometimes I miss her.
Who wouldn't miss the worlds best kisser?

Jameslee@July17,2001
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1 posted 07-17-2001 06:59 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

One kiss was never enough I always wanted more...can sympathize with you JamesM
enjoyed *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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2 posted 07-17-2001 07:47 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

nicely told James... sounds like something to miss for sure...
MARK V SHELDON
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Better than Hershey's.

-MVS

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4 posted 07-17-2001 07:34 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Only love can kiss like that. Great expression.
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5 posted 07-17-2001 07:43 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

indeed. . . why are some women like that???

it will always remain a mystery. . .

great job James. . .

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Deep in the heart


6 posted 07-17-2001 07:54 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Ov corse.  Who indeed?  Well done, James.
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7 posted 07-18-2001 10:43 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

liked it
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8 posted 07-19-2001 08:38 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

James,

   A kiss is a wonderful thing.. especially if it is with the one you love.. wonderfully expressed. I liked it

TaraB

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9 posted 07-20-2001 12:48 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

I read this and it brought to mind a song...dont ask me title or singer cuz Im never any good at that...but one of the lines goes...your kiss your kiss is on my list...of the best things in life....dont worry sugar...she is out there...
Saunni
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10 posted 07-20-2001 02:18 AM       View Profile for Saunni   Email Saunni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saunni

Oh, you wrote so beautifully about a not so good ending. Perhaps you shall see her again  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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11 posted 07-21-2001 09:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I'll have to echo rose petals .....

A kiss is a wonderful thing.. especially if it is with the one you love..

Indeed!

and Paula, I think that song was sung by
"Hall & Oates" back in the early eighties.

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 06-13-2004 03:19 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you all so much for the nice responses...recently I spent some time with her again...and its not the same...that was our moment in time...James
 
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