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VAS
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0 posted 2001-07-17 01:20 AM



syncopation de Trinidad

takes me across the sea

on the wings of love

'neath glorious sails of blue

^
^


Sky whispers your name

quite gently through the trees

singing lovely, sweet dreams to me


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^
^
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inspired by a steel drum band called Bram Brata

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JLR
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1 posted 2001-07-17 01:23 AM


Very cool...and loved the inspiration!
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2 posted 2001-07-17 08:00 AM


cool!! I enjoyed VAS.
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3 posted 2001-07-17 09:52 AM


Awright!
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4 posted 2001-07-17 10:32 AM


VAS--Music is such inspiration!
VAS
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5 posted 2001-07-17 12:41 PM


thank you all...I was having trouble getting into this one without the music that accompanied it last night, I couldn't figure out how you could be getting into it without the music...but slowly I'm letting it make the music again...maybe you are, too

thanks for your help in reminding me to listen more closely

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