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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2001-07-16 10:12 PM



Every Bit Of...

There's just something about a man who writes from the heart
When pride set aside leaves others to smile
For, his mind starts walking and his heart begins talking
And, we read the words and rest within them awhile...

He's every bit of beautiful as a dove in flight
Every bit of graceful as an angel in air
For, he rises beyond, the almighty sun
And, we find peace from the words he's willing to share...

He's every bit of kind as the new day at dawn
Every bit of loving as the stars at night
For, he rises high, above any sky
And, we become lucky to witness the words he writes...

He's every bit of strong like the cool winds in the fall
Every bit of warm as a summer day in July
For, he stands true, like the flowers in bloom
And, we find strength in his words here before our eyes...

He's every bit of familiar as a child to his mother
Every bit of pure as a snowflake in white
For, he finds the ways, to brighten our days
And, we become blessed with his words on into the night...

He's every bit of wonderful beyond any sunset seen
Every bit of lovely as a new morning starts
For, he holds the words, we all have heard
And, we become fortunate to feel his awesome heart...

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

© Copyright 2001 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2001-07-16 10:18 PM


Yes..he is every bit of that, indeed!    You're a sweetie for posting this, and a wonderful poet in the way you say things.  

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-07-16 10:23 PM


Awwwwww!  Sven will love this!  And yes he is all that and much more!  Since I adore him and since he is my friend, I thank you for writing this for him  

Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-07-16 10:59 PM


What a lovely tribute to someone who gives so much to everyone at this poetry site, and you did an excellent job, he will just loe this I am sure~kudos on a wonderful poem.

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

Lady In White
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4 posted 2001-07-17 02:06 PM



Yes, he is every bit of that...

well done, Saunni...

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-07-17 03:38 PM


Lovely words...James
Sven
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6 posted 2001-07-17 07:19 PM


Saunni,

this is just too wonderful!!     Thank you so much my friend. . . I'm very touched that you would honor me with such wonderful words from your heart. . . I will treasure them always my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper
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7 posted 2001-07-17 07:22 PM


He is every bit of that ... and MORE!  Wonderful tribute to a fine poet!
1slick_lady
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8 posted 2001-07-17 07:23 PM


yes, he is and more...how sweet of you...beautiful poem...helen
walker
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9 posted 2001-07-17 07:27 PM


He is all that indeed! Great poem!
Saunni
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West Virginia
10 posted 2001-07-17 10:56 PM


Temptress~ Thank you for saying I am a wonderful poet. You are as well!

Melissa Honeybee~ You were right, Sven did like it   I'm so glad he did.

Mysteria~ Thanks for taking the time to read this. It means a lot to me.

Lady In White~ Indeed he is   Thanks for reading this poem.

James Michael~ Thank you James for stopping by to read and comment. I appreciate it.

Sven~ What can I say? I'm glad you liked this
poem! You add so much to this poetry site. What a true and loving heart you have. You are one of a kind, so don't ever change, My Friend.

Interloper~ Thanks a million for reading and responding.  

1Slick_lady~ Thanks, I just felt he needed to know how great he is.

Walker~ Thank you Walker for reading this and commenting. It's so appreciated.  

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

SILLY WAWCHEO
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since 2001-07-06
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Mighigan
11 posted 2001-07-18 01:20 AM


Saunni,
you make everything in life sound magical...

Saunni
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West Virginia
12 posted 2001-07-18 01:30 AM


SILLY WAWCHEO, I am only magical because you are magical, My Friend. You bring so much to my life. I thank God for you always.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
13 posted 2001-07-18 03:09 AM


I've read Sven's work, and I enjoy it all just as I enjoy your poem here.  

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
14 posted 2001-07-18 05:52 AM


.....and every bit as talented.

Thank you, Saunni, for this lovely tribute.

Liz

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