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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
(Now that I've posted most of my older poetry and lyrics, I'm ready to dive into some fresh writing and thoughts. Since my style tends to be lengthy and very strict form and rhyme, I'm going to try something a little different for me: a new series of poems that I'll call "TWENTY OR LESS..." implying that each will consist of twenty or less words, in free-form style, with the intent of letting the words conjure up subjective impressions and definitions for my readers -- let the previous boundaries of style and form evaporate, for a while, and let's see what your impressions are... Enjoy! -MVS) ======================================== Reading your thought A thousand reflected smiles Eyes slanting your desire A constellation of music inside (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done Mark... especially enjoyed the third line!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Volumes composed in symphonic tones heard when reading your thoughts |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Approaching a haiku there, Ron! Nice. So your interpretation points to a composer inspired by relating to another? -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Many types of composition Mark... when I read your poem...I thought of the way love is composed in our hearts... Listened meaning from underlying words many voices speak |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
As the resident romantic, I see a woman looking at you with desire, and it creates the music of your lives. Enjoying these writes, challenging in a way, as there are so many ways to interpret. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Well put, Ron. Keeps me thinking... Sandra -- this is a lot of fun... It's like a big "Rorschach Test". From my perspective, I get to glimpse at the thought-process of others while at the same time achieving some insight into angles I had not considered within my own writing and interpretations. I definitely can see your interpretation, as well, Sandra. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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