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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-07-16 08:21 PM


I feel you touching me
But your no where in sight
Your thinking of e arn't you?
Intuitions might
Connie McDonald
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-16 08:48 PM



hmmm...E...e-mail...esp?...you've got me thinking on this one!

Zinsser
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2 posted 2001-07-16 09:00 PM


Sunshine.....  LOL   Then I've done my job
              Thanks   : )

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-07-16 09:42 PM


Very, VERY clever, Connie! (and less than 20!!).  You almost tricked my detail-oriented, grammar-policing intuition!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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4 posted 2001-07-17 08:15 AM


nicely done... nicely done indeed...

yep never know who is touching or watching..

Zinsser
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5 posted 2001-07-17 06:22 PM


Mark: detail-oriented, grammer-policing
                 intuition
        That scares the Heck a Roonies
                 out of me
              ROFLMAO  LOL
Glad I was able to please with the read....

Cpat: Glad you enjoyed
      Your words mean more then you know....
                        

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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6 posted 2001-07-18 06:46 PM


love the word play in this one. . . wonder if anyone will notice it???  

great job. . .

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7 posted 2001-07-18 07:01 PM


I lov it and am still thinging about the e
wandering glider
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8 posted 2001-07-18 07:29 PM


Hmmm - - -
Guess I'm not one of the enlightened readers herabouts.
Your liberal language escapes me.
Tricked, I suppose.

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