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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-16 06:23 PM

Inspired by Cpat Hair's "Illusions of love."

~*~
~*~

holding emptiness
something yet nothing at all
disappearing act

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-16 07:03 PM

I'm really feeling this. The oxymoronic situation of lost love. Hope laid upon hope ending in nothing at all. Write forever..

*barefeet and greengrass*

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-07-16 07:37 PM

Very nice, but, was the feel there? For only a brief time? Did your soul sing momentarily?..ahh, if so,then it is still a sweet memory of the good times..let the bad ones fade like all bad ones should..gentle smile

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-16 07:39 PM

We must embrace emptiness to appreciate the fullness of life. I like this one!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-07-16 08:17 PM

No wonder my arms are tired, I've been holding on to nothing so long, they ache!

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-07-16 09:08 PM

I won't even try...

I'll just say - well done!

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

6 posted 2001-07-16 09:27 PM

This speaks volume!!!!! Great Haiku! Every word a

beat. No such thing as emptiness ~ where something once was ~ something always remains. Loved it! Love and peace ((~.~))

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-07-17 09:38 AM

FireDancer123 ~ Just because I'm an oxygen breathing fool, you don't have to call me a moron

Thanx for the visit and the wonderful comment

Logan ~ Right you are

  Thanx for the read.

Lone Wolf ~ Amen!

Colleen ~ Then let it go, lass, for there is nothing there for you but memories.

Sunshine ~ A rare visit from you.  Deepest thanx!

Flutterwings ~ Thank you VERY much.  First time you've visited me, I think.  Welcome.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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