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Open Poetry #15

I Broke the Treadmill..

FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-07-16 04:50 PM

I woke abruptly from my dream
and my head was spinning with confusion and hunger
"must get up and weigh myself"
and then back onto the treadmill
the engine made a groaning sound
and the track moved in starts and stops
not halfway through my workout
guess it's been worn down
I must get off
But I'm not thin enough yet
I'm not done yet
now what?

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-16 04:59 PM

(smiling) Like the surealistic quality of this.is it dream or real..as I read I asked myself...

then I just enjoyed... and found it could be applied to many many things in life..

good write...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-07-16 05:38 PM

Now, put the treadmill in the garage and have yourself a non-demanding walk in nature, with no expectations, and see if you don't feel better...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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