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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-07-16 03:30 PM


Two sides to every story
And I’ve torn a page of yours
It all can seem so black and white
When opening closed doors
You’re normal on the cover
But you’re dusted deep inside
So open up your bindings now
And show me what you hide

A thousand words are meaningless
If wrapped up in your lies
So picture where were headed
If you live on in disguise
You think you’ve got me going
But I read between the lines
Your story’s faded from the truth
And truth’s what mine defines


© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-16 03:32 PM


Kevin... this is an excellent write... good work!!


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2 posted 2001-07-16 03:33 PM


I sure would love to read this to someone I know tonight!!!   And sometimes, there's more than two sides to every story, even if there's only two people involved. LOL..thanks for saying this one for me!
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3 posted 2001-07-16 03:52 PM


This is superb!!!  You look like a young man, compared to this old teacher here.  Oh, that I could have written so well when in teens.  Now you're probably going to tell me you're in your 20's.  I see all these Moms and Dads that look like they're in their teens and they're not, it's just my 'age'old perspective.

Anyway, fantastic write with wisdom and flair.

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4 posted 2001-07-17 04:08 AM


Really good expression Kevin...James
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5 posted 2001-07-17 09:25 AM



Kevin-
   This is just awesome!  
   You've expressed these emotions so perfectly..
   Excellent write!  

   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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6 posted 2001-07-17 09:28 AM



Very good, indeed!

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7 posted 2001-07-17 10:16 AM


Kevin,

  "You’re normal on the cover
But you’re dusted deep inside
So open up your bindings now
And show me what you hide..."

That would be my favorite part of this poem. Very well written I enjoyed muchly

TaraB

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