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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-07-16 07:35 AM


Censors Venture

Forgive me I’ve flown the coop, I
Fly philosophies loop de loop.
I’ve gone beyond the hell of seem
Resigning all of scheme and dream.

I’ve gone to nether whence I came
Where all is same and none, to blame
It is a place of sophist mist
It is a place of none exist

It’s there I amortize my I
There, I fly as the butterfly
And play with fire old and new
To you a lie, to I it true.

There is no moss upon its ground
There’s no collect, it’s never found.
I circle in eternal space
The flying carpets lace of grace.

A dementia of adventure
A countercultures debenture


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-07-16 08:34 AM


"A dementia of adventure"... Love it...

I just visited my 98 yr old grandmother.. She's pretty forgetful... yet she can step out of her dementia and make light of it, and joke that she's the brightest lightbulb on the dementia ward... and she's right...  

Thanks for brightening my day... again... Dear Sy...

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2 posted 2001-07-16 08:58 AM



...a flying carpet's lace of grace....

I think I need to visit one of your fires, so I can see where the sparks lead...

what a wonderful write, Sy...full of vision and imagination....

one for the soul...

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3 posted 2001-07-16 09:26 AM


nice.... enjoyed
VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-16 09:46 AM


To you a lie, to I it true.


huh?

who sentia dementia?

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5 posted 2001-07-16 11:00 AM


Seymour~

'Forgive me I’ve flown the coop, I
Fly philosophies loop de loop.'


I LOVE IT !

And if the flight's not full ... I'd like to book a return trip !

You gave me a wonderful smile to wear this day !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-07-16 11:56 AM


Nan,
My love, I just love brightening you day. *L*

Sunshine,
Your sun shine warms the cockles of my heart.

Cpat Hair,
Thank you.

VAS,
Dementia, "lunacy."

Marge,
Yor answer just gave me a big hug and kiss.
Thank you *L*



Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-07-16 01:51 PM


Forgive me I’ve flown the coop, I
Fly philosophies loop de loop.
I’ve gone beyond the hell of seem
Resigning all of scheme and dream.

I’ve gone to nether whence I came
Where all is same and none, to blame
It is a place of sophist mist
It is a place of none exist

It’s there I amortize my I
There, I fly as the butterfly
And play with fire old and new
To you a lie, to I it true.
================================

YOU ARE ...



and every time we read your rhyme
its like going back to cadence cool school
Come fly with Sy on his groovy butterfly bus
With a Randy dragon driving theres no stopping us


*********************
I saw you and Randy flying loop de loop in front of the moon last night *L*
*winkiewinkie*
me

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-07-16 02:57 PM


JM,
My dearest butterfly
You have placd a wreath upon my head.
That's shared with Randys dragonhead.
He's now become an unruly Child
Blowing smoke and fire like wild.
You have that effect on both of us.
Hugs and kisses ME.

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