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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2001-07-16 06:03 AM


Another PIPYC collaboration with
Temptress
Auguste
Rascalx
Professor of Gloom
Poemcrazy
Paula Finn

leaflets of passions unfurl

making hidden feelings swirl

and poets are lifted in dreaming's swift tide,
inhaling salt air, their feelings can't hide

i'm dreaming of a kiss.

tucked inside my heart

raging from within

My lips do passion's art

painting with pleasure a moment's soft touch

desire consuming...wanting so much

i long to give in but fear stays my hand...
conflicting emotions i try to understand.

a swirl of thoughts, emotion just pools,
temptation of lips, eyes so like jewels.

priceless visions do dance amiss
footfalls warn of the dreaming mists

awake awake to the love we have found...
no more to our dreams must we be bound

for if by chance this love proves to be true...
let me wake up to the dream that is you.

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-16-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-16 09:34 AM


To the passion inside be loving and dear, for dreams of desire are nothing to fear. Accept what is in you, be at one with your soul, with life and its treasure, be happy and whole.

Enjoyed the read, good work.

Rick

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-07-16 04:20 PM


Lots of nice verses and I always dream of kisses...James
rascalx
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA
3 posted 2001-07-17 03:42 AM


I just wanted to say "thanks" to my fellow writers. I am pleasantly surprised by how well this little experiment turned out... an interesting blend of talent and style. This was fun!   We need to do this again!
                         - Jeff

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-07-17 04:04 AM




Bravo......

A wonderful lovely collaboration ......

I loved it .......

Thank you all
*******************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Temptress
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5 posted 2001-07-17 03:33 PM


Well it certainly was fun, and turned out interesting for sure!  
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-07-17 03:51 PM


Here's to you all...
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2001-07-17 07:01 PM


Love it!
Sandra

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2001-07-17 07:57 PM


Wowwwwww a splendid collaborative creation...

Hugs2uAll
~*coco~*

Balladeer
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9 posted 2001-07-17 08:51 PM


Well done!!! These are little things that makes Passions so special  
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