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bbent
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since 2001-01-07
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Alaska

0 posted 2001-07-16 01:29 AM



Your garden of pleasures,
so wild and so free...
Beckons to me to be tended...

With tender attention,
and sweet nurturing,
love’s harvest is real, not pretended...

Moist furrows, and soft mounds,
a culinary delight...
Long nights full of pleasure they bear...

I could eat from your table,
each day of my life,
and never grow tired of the fare...




Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...


[This message has been edited by bbent (edited 07-16-2001).]

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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-16 01:37 AM


that last stanza is really fine!!!!!
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-07-16 01:44 AM


Hmmm...gives new meaning to 'table for two'.  Enjoyed.
bbent
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 521
Alaska
3 posted 2001-07-16 01:59 AM


Thankyou VAS...the last verse was my favorite also.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

bbent
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 521
Alaska
4 posted 2001-07-16 02:05 AM


Thanks JLR and I do believe you are right.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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