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Marge Tindal
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Something Old ... Something Blue

~*Marge Tindal*~

Something old, something blue
borrowed memories of you
now fade from my view
as you walk away
with somebody new

That old look in your eyes
that I still recognize
now slowly I realize
you look at her that way too
as the tears come to my eyes

I'm caught in memory's trace
that time cannot erase
these old memories embrace
a time way back when
I was the smile on your face

Something old ~ somebody new
something I've got to do
get past loving you
I've just got to move on
hoping to find somebody new


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-16-2001 12:04 AM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

a time way back when
I was the smile on your face

How I felt this poem...especially these two lines.  Thanks for this!
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2 posted 07-16-2001 12:12 AM       View Profile for Flutterwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Flutterwings's Home Page   View IP for Flutterwings

The message was loud and clear and with such a wonderful beat... that I almost got my guitar out and put music to it. I like the attitude and determination in these vivid images. Sometimes we have to let go..... and go on to something better. Sometimes, it hurts but, nothing lasts forever.
Bravo! I give this a   Love and peace ((~.~))

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3 posted 07-16-2001 12:32 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Something young.....something smart
Hey, Marge, come and take my heart!
Something sweet....something nice..
Won't you have a little slice?
He is gone....I am here
Elevate to Balladeer!  
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What a cool Pic!!!!
what a beautiful bittersweet blue write.
LOL@Balladeer...
better get to elevating Margie girl...
time and Spam are a wasting   *LOL*

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking
I passed that point long ago

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5 posted 07-16-2001 02:26 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Forget the invitation of Mr Deer,
And get your bootie on over here.
Vancouver is the dating hub,
Just sashay into any ole pub.
Men here are a dime a dozen,
I can introduce you to my cousin?
Forget him if he walked Marge,
The world of men is very large!
He’s just another fish out to sea,
I told you come and visit me!
   He he  Yanno, it always hurts when they hook up with someone new, even if we don't want them.  Do you suppose it must be a female kinda thingee?  Oh I hate to have to think at this hour it hurts. PS...beautiful graphic, just beautiful!


[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-16-2001).]

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Something old.......
Something blue.....

Like the thoughts I have now
thinking of words said by you.....

Dear ~*Marge*~
Such lovely and touching piece.....

{{{hugs}}}
*************************


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Marge-

yes, those offers might sound nice
but, might i suggest you think twice
these arizona men are hot
whether summertime or not
just come and visit ME, my friend
we'll find a man your heart to mend
and bring those muses with you too
'cuz these guys will inspire you
balladeer's ok i guess
but why should you settle for less
when phoenix promises great things
when caution to the wind one flings
mysteria....bring her along
would I ever steer you wrong
trust me, dear, you wait and see
how sweet those desert men can be
i'll be waiting by the door
you'll never have to frown no more

     

Marge, sweet friend..    
I really do love this poem.  
It's beautiful, and the graphic is lovely.    

love ya,  
~vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-16-2001).]

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JLR~
A gentle *hug*~

FlutterWings~
Must admit that my little singing muse delivered it to me.
It just sang me~

Balladeer~
You ARE the top floor, sweetie !
Is it any wonder I adore you ? ! ! !

JanetMarie~
Glad you like it hon.
All that BalladeerMan and SPAM too ?
What more could a gal ask for ! !

Mysteria~
Thank you for the invitation
but I have an inclination
to travel to the arms so near
and elevate my Balladeer ~

MyEnchantedMelody~
I'm so glad you like it.
A little blue-noted muse sang it softly to me.

Vicky~
Just look at you and Mysteria,my friends
trying to start a 'fix-her-up' to mend
Thank you for the kind invite
but that Balladeer thinks I might
Enjoy just 'a little slice' ....
so I think ... I'll do it TWICE !

LOL ! You all sure are fun.
Balladeer ...  
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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Yep, I've been there a time or two myself. Great expression, Marge, and beautifully presented!
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10 posted 07-16-2001 07:33 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Mysteria....forget the invitation of mr. deer?
Vicky...balladeer's ok, I guess???

I AM WOUNDED!!!   I thought they were my buddies! Marge, thank goodness you are such a connisseur of class..phoenixes crash and burn and they don't call Canadiens MOUNTIES for nuttin! Thank you, Marge, for standing by yore man  
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Marge, I really, really enjoyed reading your poem, and all the replies too.

Glad I caught this before bedtime.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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12 posted 07-16-2001 07:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~
Thanks, love.
Glad you got in for this one.

Balladeer~
... YEAH !
Sound effects just for my man !
You're worth it, baby !

Titia~
I enjoyed penning this piece.
Soooooo glad you enjoyed the friends that stopped by too !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Geez, Marge, something old and something blue?..very gentle smile
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balladeer, sweet gentle man
you've got me feeling bad
it wasn't my intention
to make you feel so sad

just wanted Marge to join me
in the Arizona sun
and bring along Mysteria
oh, that would be such fun

how 'bout you come and join us
you'll no longer be blue
and once you're here, i'll bet
you'll teach these men a thing or two

don't worry 'bout no sunburn
i've got sunscreen to spare
we'll gladly rub it on you
just trust us if you dare

we'll take such good care of you
you'll never want to leave
and if you think i'm lying
soon, 'deer, you will believe  

hugs to you, 'deer..
~vicky


Marge-
   you know i couldn't just let him go
   on being all wounded and sad..lol.  
   you just bring him and mysteria along
   with you and will ALL have a great time!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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HOW VERY BEAUTIFUL THE WORDS
INCREDIBLE THE MUSIC
THANKS FOR PUTTING IT ALL TOGETHER.


come join me in our glen
forget about the other men
and if we let our spirits rise
smoke will cloud this surprise
          warrior
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Logan~
*smiling* right back at ya' !

Vicky~
LOL !
You do a nice 'backstroke' ! !  

SoaringEagle~
My Warrior~... now's there's an offer I'd not refuse ! ! !
I love you !
~*Marge*~

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17 posted 07-16-2001 10:24 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Vicky, I must say that I am filled with great elation
To read your words of love with such a wondrous invitation.
To be there with the three of you 'neath Arizona's sun
Would be the greatest thrill that had been known to anyone
And thoughts of hands carressing me with touch of Coppertone
Is certainly enough to make me tingle to the bone...

But while you and Mysteria were tempting Marge with thoughts
Of mounties, Aztecs, fun in sun and other who-knows-whats
Sweet Marge just smiled and shook her head and made her thoughts quite clear
By pledging all her loving to her kind, sweet Balladeer
So spread that lotion somewhere else..my body will be tanned
And cared for in a tender way by Marge's loving hand..
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Oh, no! What do my eyes now see? What does her words infer?
My Marge has just now called another man her warrior!!!
Hey, Vicky, I was kidding! Please believe these words I say
That you're the only only one for me!! Hey, girl! I'm on my way!!!  
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Geez, Balladeer, and it isn't even deer season yet..ahh, I think you are gonna need that grinning face pretty badly...gentle smile
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LOL !
Balladeer,you surrendered already, my sweets !

I just LOVE it !
You are just the mostest fun - in the sun !
And .... I got the wampun !

See Vicky ... I told ya' ... he's the best !
What a quick quipper he is !
And .... there's more .... but I'm not sharing ... er, I mean telling !

And folks .... this WAS a serious poem before it was turned into a fantasy playground !

Love you, Balladeer~
What was that about a 'backstroke', Vicky ?

Logan~
It's always *deer* season !  LOL !
~*Marge*~

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'deer, i don't know what to think
you don't seem very sure
so i can't help but question
if your love for me is pure  

i'd much enjoy your company
if it's me that you desire
come see me for a little while
babe, let me light your fire  

come see me, 'deer, if you're sincere
but, let me make it clear
you'd best not ever break my heart
or make me shed a tear  

if you pledge your love
then, at another, make a pass
i'm gonna have my brother
track you down and kick your ....  

     

Marge-
Sorry we turned this thread into our
own little playground.
You KNOW I really do love this poem, and
the poem itself still IS serious.  
Truly lovely..

love and big hugs,
~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-16-2001).]

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VICKY ! !
I love it !
Forget serious ... this is too much fun !
Now where's Mysteria to help liven up this thread ??????

Balladeer~ ... I think you're being gang-quipped ! !

Wipe that grin off your face !
~*Me*~

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Well Balladeer it looks quite clear to me,
That you’ve got things in hand I see.
Vicky in Phoenix, on her knees begging you,
While Marge is shouting out, “I’m true blue!”
Well I’ll be no part of this ménage a trios,
I am not a member of some bourgeois!
Look at you Sir; you’re so very fickle,
Got yourself into one fine pickle.
Marge, calls another her warrior indeed,
Look at his written words and heed:

        "come join me in our glen
        forget about the other men
        and if we let our spirits rise
        smoke will cloud this surprise"

Women like an element of surprise,
If men hint, we love to improvise.
Now what you’re offering is pretty clear,
I believe it was “a little slice of deer?”
Well look above at Soaringeagle’s last line,
To me that’s sounding might fine.
And as much as I love you Balladeer,
His message is more loud, more clear!
So Canada wins the ménage a trios,
Maybe you should learn parle’ vois François.
         
(Hugs Deer, all in fun!)  You guys are 3 funny!

p.s I always hated that song, what happenend to "Stand By Your Woman?"

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you will always dance~

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Marge sweetie I really enjoyed your poem and the graphic was sooo beautiful...

Hugs2uDearPoetFriend
*~coco~*
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