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Kitty**
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0 posted 2001-07-15 09:40 PM



* You're with me *

In the shadows of the night, I let my mind drift .
I'm alone, but  you are here.
I feel your heartbeat. I feel your breath upon my cheek.
I see you. I see the twinkle in your grey eyes.
I hear your teasing voice and I hear your laughter.
And I want you.
I want the reality of you.

I'm alone, but for always * you're with me * !

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-07-15 10:41 PM


Oh...sweet...

Nice to see you again, Kitty.  

Qumar Fatthi
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2 posted 2001-07-15 11:04 PM


nice good effort
please carry on.......


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-07-16 12:05 PM


Kitty~
I do like that breath upon my cheek'~

Nicely done.
Good to see you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-16 10:53 AM


such a close relationship is an awesome thing.


vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-20 03:31 PM



Kitty-
   What lovely thoughts you've penned..
   Nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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